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Monday, October 29, 2012

Magpie Tales ~ What she wants!



Another great challenge from The Mag.  Here is the prompt...



Here is my take on this...




She thought she knew!

They kissed;
as if in a dream.
No substance;
just air between them.

Floating above each other;
afraid to hang on.
They kissed again;
unsure of the first.

How she wanted it to be;
solid and still.
The kiss;
so fragile-unreal.

The rain began;
surrounding their hearts.
His kiss;
pinned her to the earth.

Soaked and broken;
clinging to a dream.
They kissed;
and vanished into thin air!



SueAnn@2012






Have a magical and blessed day!
Be creative and imagine what could be!!
Hugging you

SueAnn

12 comments:

  1. smiles...nice bit of magic in that kiss....kissing in the rain is def romantic...as is dancing....i like your take on the pic...

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  2. Kisses have a way of vanishing into thin air...

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  3. I really like what you did with this, SueAnn.

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  4. Very nice ... especially the repetition of 'the kiss.'

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  5. Love what you did with the prompt pic. Wish I had it to hang on my wall!

    =)

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  6. You have added magic to the picture. :)

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  7. Very enjoyable. And a fine improvisation on the picture.

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  8. Damn, all the good ones run when you kiss them under the rain ;-)

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  9. I liked the picture that was the prompt, but with the way you made it, I like it even more!

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