Pages

Monday, May 7, 2012

Magpie Tales - Mag 116 - Drifting!!



The image challenging us this week is...

image: River Irwell by R.A.D. Stainforth


Stillness Drifting

She felt the pain;
she sat so still.
She felt the rain;
it didn't feel real!

She felt the water;
she's sitting still.
She felt it rushing;
it's tears will spill.
She felt the coldness;
she felt it still.
She felt the dampness;
it's fingers grasping her heels.

She felt it swirl;
she lowered her head.
She felt the darkness;
and now she's dead.

 The water seemed so peaceful...too peaceful.  I just had to go this way.  Always aware of what lies beneath.


Here is my take on the piece...



SueAnn @ 2012


Visit The Mag and see the other brilliant offerings.

Have a creative and imaginative day!
Hugging you

SueAnn

 
 


2 comments:

  1. really like your form...the she's and then the break line...def the surface conveys a different message than what lies beneath...yeepp

    ReplyDelete
  2. Wow, beautiful poem and paintings, SueAnn!! Love the new blog too!!

    Hugs and Many Blessings,
    Coreen XOXO

    ReplyDelete